So if you have tried this game in English, you miiiiight have noticed that it wasn't written by a fluent English speaker.

I was frustrated by all of the mistakes in the English translation, so I went through the game's files as best I could and fixed typos, grammar, and apostrophes. I went through all the enemies, all the classes, all the skills, all the books, all the weapon descriptions, and all map areas. I tried to be as faithful as possible to the source material, with a few editorial exceptions:

  1. I made Griffith's Le'Garde's lines a little less casual. More "I will not allow that" and less "Not gonna happen."
  2. I changed a line from the knight's backstory that implies the armies of Rondon would leave a surviving child or two to tell the story of what had happened. FYI it's because the original wording was clunky and it refused to fit in the text window no matter what I did. Now, the children were let go 'for sport'. See, it's still depressing! You get to enjoy that.
  3. I re-wrote some of the dark priest's reasons for heading to the dungeon, as the original text was very muddled and obtuse. Now the priest finds the prophecy and heads to the dungeons to not only find out what the fates intend, but to overcome them, bending them to his will.
  4. I re-wrote the crow mauler poem so it rhymes now. As it was, the poem tried to rhyme "behind you now" with "reap what I sow" and that's...not a thing. Now it's "reap as I plow."
  5. I changed out Defence Stance for "Defensive Stance". Come at me, brits, I'm updating this game to be consistently in American English!
  6. Finally, I changed the demon child's birth prompt to say "Name your terrible son." This change should speak for itself.

A short list of some of my favorite typos:

That's a fist one --> That's a first!
to pregnate her --> to impregnate her
you brought this to yourself --> you brought this on yourself
they're barking at the wrong tree --> they're barking up the wrong tree
the hunger almost hooks you up --> the hunger almost consumes you
they are but child's play words (real Derek Zoolander quote) --> they are but children's stories
once upon in time --> once upon a time
you don't know what he is responsible of --> you don't know what he is responsible for!
Mecenary lost his another arm! --> lost his other arm too
your child crawls to itself-->your child crawls by itself
all with no avail -->all to no avail
engraved on your head-->engraved in your mind
I'm at a loss of words here even--> me too, game. me too.


To install, just unzip the mod file and transfer the www file over to your game's directory, overwriting files when prompted. The path ought to be something like:
C:\Program Files (x86)\Steam\steamapps\common\Fear & Hunger\

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Fear and Hunger Now in English v2.22

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v2.22 of my Fear and Hunger English translation fix. This mod fixes typos and grammar errors in the original script, as well as a few bugs in the original...

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mushr--m
mushr--m

hello! I really want this mod (the writing errors in this game can really take me out of the atmosphere sometimes...) but is there any way for it to be compatible with the reign of new gods mod (https://platypus-gems.itch.io/fear-hunger-reign-of-new-gods) ? I would love to play with them both ;_;

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blink123 Creator
blink123

I also wish it was possible, but unfortunately both that mod and frappollo's bug fixes overwrite all the game's data files, and erase my mod in the process. I can't fix this without re-writing the mod from scratch and that's just too many dozens of hours of work for me. Someday maybe, once both mods are in a stable place.

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mushr--m
mushr--m

I understand, thank you for the response as well as your hard work!

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blink123 Creator
blink123

SighingSlider and Guest, I just released a fixed version, v2.11, and it should not have that crash bug present. Please let me know if you have any issues with it.

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SighingSlider
SighingSlider

Great! I can confirm that the bug doesn't happen anymore in the latest version.

I don't know if you're willing to fix even more typos, but I did find a few stragglers during my playthroughs. If you're interested, here's what I remember:

Nosramus's dialogue misspells convenience as "convinience" in one of his lines: I.imgur.com

The book that describes Ma'habre is titled as "Ma'havre", which seems inconsistent: I.imgur.com & I.imgur.com

Sometimes when you go to the Level 3 prison area for the first time, one of the lines of text that appears at the bottom misspells noises as "noices": I.imgur.com

I hope it helps!

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blink123 Creator
blink123

Thank you, I appreciate it! I will fix Nosramus's dialogue and the noice noises. The last one, though, isn't a typo! It's actually that the place name changed over time! It used to be Ma'habre, but in modern times, it's called "Mahavre". A few of the books make reference to this fact, but additionally, if you ask the New Gods about "Mahavre" instead of "Ma'habre", they'll have an additional line about the city: "Language always changes." I think that the modern one is supposed to sound more French rather than...I don't know, Babylonian.

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SighingSlider
SighingSlider

Ah, you're right, so that's what it was! I wasn't sure if the game acknowledged it as an alternative spelling.

Anyways, here's a few more minor typos if you're willing to correct them:

When you use necromancy, it was "succesful": I.imgur.com

A few typos in the Ending B dialogue as well.
"You sanity declines": I.imgur.com
"You know realize": I.imgur.com
"You long quest": I.imgur.com

And when you find Enki in his little hidey-hole in the void, his 2nd line erroneously refers him as Mercenary: I.imgur.com

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blink123 Creator
blink123

Finally fixed these with my latest patch! Please do let me know if you see any other typos as you're going through, I appreciate it a ton.

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Guest
Guest

Does this mod translate from Russian or is it just to improve spelling??

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blink123 Creator
blink123

It just fixes the numerous spelling and grammar errors in the English PC version, as well as a few minor bug fixes.

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